Chloe: "Im surprised that Richy didn't send a complant it looked extremely painful"
Jake: "im extremely disappointed that someone would deliberately eye gouge Richy mcmuffen"
Handwriting and Punctuation: Week One
Today is: Tuesday 25 October 2011 Ko te: Raatu tenei ra, te rua tekau ma rima o Whiringa-a-nuku, i te tau rua mano ma tekau ma tahi.
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a very rare humpback whale thats entirely white has been spotted near australias great barrier reef the whales thought to be a few weeks old and was spotted by a local man. he said "i couldn't believe my eyes and I just grabbed my camera then the white calf approached my boat, seeming to want to check us out."
Welcome to Chloe's Term 4 Page
25/10/11
26/10/11
http://www.stuff.co.nz/sport/rugby/all-blacks/5851214/McCaw-plays-down-eye-gouge-as-video-released
Jake and Chloe's comment is:
Chloe: "Im surprised that Richy didn't send a complant it looked extremely painful"
Jake: "im extremely disappointed that someone would deliberately eye gouge Richy mcmuffen"
Handwriting and Punctuation: Week One
Today is: Tuesday 25 October 2011
Ko te: Raatu tenei ra, te rua tekau ma rima o Whiringa-a-nuku, i te tau rua mano ma tekau ma tahi.
Add punctuation to this paragraph:
a very rare humpback whale thats entirely white has been spotted near australias great barrier reef
the whales thought to be a few weeks old and was spotted by a local man.
he said "i couldn't believe my eyes and I just grabbed my camera then the white calf approached my boat, seeming to want to check us out."
Originally sourced:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsround/15111746
31/10/11
How i think i have gone last week:
Well i think iam improving but i still have a long way to go.
What will i do to improve this week:
I will try to set m mind to the task and make sure im well organized so i have no resen to mess around.
23 NOVEMBER 2011
thursday 24 november
tuesday 6 december 2011
my end of year reflections